tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post8633315650770896592..comments2023-10-24T08:50:13.552-07:00Comments on दिल की कलम से...: फक्र मुझे अब है कहने में, हाँ मैं धंधा करती हूँ....दिलीपhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15304203780968402944noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-28249208217572658312014-05-16T06:02:39.640-07:002014-05-16T06:02:39.640-07:00Dileep aaj is samay Modi ji jeet kar pehla samb...Dileep aaj is samay Modi ji jeet kar pehla sambodhan de rahein hain.......aur is parv ki bela mein aap bhi jaan lein ki aap apni misaal khud hain kabhi kisi ki bisaat itni badi nahin hogi ki apke bare mein tippadi /teeka kare.<br />Aprtim dharohar de chuke aap hindi kavita jagat ko!<br />Nissandeh! Aisa likhne ke baad paigambari ya diwangi jo bhi alam taaari ho jaye ....kalam tut jaya karti hai!<br />Aapne pa lee ahaituki snehmayi kripa bhagwati ki <br />,jivan ka aapke chhand to bandh gaya aur aap kalidas ho chaleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-62498530877413931162014-05-16T05:51:47.815-07:002014-05-16T05:51:47.815-07:00Apne vigat jivan ki antim,
Aagami jivan ki pratham...Apne vigat jivan ki antim,<br />Aagami jivan ki pratham <br />Tipppadi...... karne ki cheshta!<br /> Sadhe teen shabd prati minut ki Khas typing speed hai<br />For a spiritual spastic like me,<br />It was immense<br />Rather too overwhelming to find that each of your creation surmounted the preceding.....<br /><br />Per chance it was....<br /><br />For sinful me this grace was given,<br /> on earth to see<br /> the ways of heaven<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-42612443744058329692011-04-19T09:51:13.765-07:002011-04-19T09:51:13.765-07:00i really appreciate you buddyi really appreciate you buddyIncarceratedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10372245434694655073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-84428115999690288592010-05-08T06:17:52.323-07:002010-05-08T06:17:52.323-07:00vah bahut khub .....
bahut bariki se apne bhavo ko...vah bahut khub .....<br />bahut bariki se apne bhavo ko <br />vykt kiya hai ...........प्रज्ञा पाण्डेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821641995349337607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-59510556118295105472010-05-07T21:47:06.323-07:002010-05-07T21:47:06.323-07:00बहुत ही बेहतरीन!! वाकई।बहुत ही बेहतरीन!! वाकई।SKThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10729740101109115803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-73823737724545741132010-05-05T12:23:27.925-07:002010-05-05T12:23:27.925-07:00जितनी तारीफ की जाये कम ही रहेगी !! Hats Off Brothe...जितनी तारीफ की जाये कम ही रहेगी !! Hats Off Brother !!शिवम् मिश्राhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07241309587790633372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-15768330454396506312010-05-05T00:42:09.268-07:002010-05-05T00:42:09.268-07:00No man on earth can touch a woman's soul. They...No man on earth can touch a woman's soul. They can play and knead her flesh, but they can never win a woman's heart.<br /><br />Beautiful creation !....badhaii !<br /><br />DivyaZEALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04046257625059781313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-57661115003648583142010-05-04T06:54:41.710-07:002010-05-04T06:54:41.710-07:00दिलिप जी - पहली बार आपके ब्लॉग पर आना हुआ है, पर क...दिलिप जी - पहली बार आपके ब्लॉग पर आना हुआ है, पर कमाल की कविता लिखी है, क्या मर्म उतारा है अपने लेखन से, हम तो दंग रह गये, बिल्कुल ऐसा लगा कि हम खुद ही व्यथित हैं इस सबसे, जैसे ये कविता हम ही जी रहे हों।<br /><br />-----<br />वैसे भी कविता तभी लिखी और समझी जा सकती हैं जब उसमें अपना मन उतार दें ।<br /><br />बधाईविवेक रस्तोगीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01077993505906607655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-40112327427170905392010-05-04T05:13:34.943-07:002010-05-04T05:13:34.943-07:00Bahut achhi post. Maja aa gaya bhai padhkar..........Bahut achhi post. Maja aa gaya bhai padhkar.........Harshkant tripathi"Pawan"https://www.blogger.com/profile/12119765298800994769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-12798191570888931742010-05-04T05:09:01.426-07:002010-05-04T05:09:01.426-07:00Bahut achchi rachna hai Dilipji,
bahut sikhne mil...Bahut achchi rachna hai Dilipji,<br /><br />bahut sikhne milta hai aapki rachnao se..Prakash Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04801182284591806629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-57984058527353472332010-05-04T05:01:38.944-07:002010-05-04T05:01:38.944-07:00dileep ji...
mujhe abhi bhi hairaani hoti hai ki a...dileep ji...<br />mujhe abhi bhi hairaani hoti hai ki aapko itna samay kaise mil pata hai..<br />bahut behtareen rachna.......<br />yun hi likhte rahein....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-12692122812799451612010-05-04T04:47:28.662-07:002010-05-04T04:47:28.662-07:00दिलीप जी
इस रचना के लिये तो शब्द कम है…………………औरत क...दिलीप जी<br />इस रचना के लिये तो शब्द कम है…………………औरत के जीवन के उस पहलू को छू लिया है जिसे लोग हिकारत से देखते हैं……………एक कटु सत्य को शब्दों में बाँध दिया………………और हमें नि:शब्द कर दिया।vandana guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00019337362157598975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-69389961153119493202010-05-04T02:51:28.706-07:002010-05-04T02:51:28.706-07:00bahut hi dil se likhi hui linesbahut hi dil se likhi hui linespooja sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10246357602714976142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-12584445863102029322010-05-04T01:21:07.130-07:002010-05-04T01:21:07.130-07:00behtreen likhte hain aap ..bahut si panktiyaan dil...behtreen likhte hain aap ..bahut si panktiyaan dil ko chu gayi ...रंजू भाटियाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07700299203001955054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-68425508534267716022010-05-04T00:29:33.885-07:002010-05-04T00:29:33.885-07:00dilip.....
sabse pahle to is tarah ki nazm ko sa...dilip..... <br /><br />sabse pahle to is tarah ki nazm ko saflta purvak lay me bandhe rakhne ke liye badhayi...aur doosri baat ki is nazm me jo kahani gunthi hai tumne usme dank chipa hai ...padhte padhte lagta hai dank kai jagah ..behad shandar rachnaस्वप्निल तिवारीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17439788358212302769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-91072437673862790422010-05-03T23:56:09.413-07:002010-05-03T23:56:09.413-07:00gajab kaa likhate ho dilip.tumhaare samane natmast...gajab kaa likhate ho dilip.tumhaare samane natmastak hun.lajabab, behad khubsurat, maarmik, satyapurn. meri subhakaamanaaye our aashrvaad tumhaare saath hain. likhate raho.tumhari rachnaao ke sahi mulyaankan ke liye mere pass sabd nahi hai. ek baat our blog ke setting me changing laao comments karane me prob aati hai.arvindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15562030349519088493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-90107775690521010322010-05-03T23:06:23.142-07:002010-05-03T23:06:23.142-07:00सुन्दरता अपने चरम पर आपके शब्दों के माध्यम से,थोड़ी...सुन्दरता अपने चरम पर आपके शब्दों के माध्यम से,थोड़ी सी कटु है लेकिन .......<br /><br />कुंवर जी,kunwarji'shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03572872489845150206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-19829864480018648992010-05-03T23:05:24.840-07:002010-05-03T23:05:24.840-07:00बहुत बढ़िया लिखा है...कुछ लाइन्स बहुत अच्छी लगीं!बहुत बढ़िया लिखा है...कुछ लाइन्स बहुत अच्छी लगीं!pallavi trivedihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13303235514780334791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-56782330896574390742010-05-03T21:20:05.685-07:002010-05-03T21:20:05.685-07:00बहुत संवेदनशील रचना...औरत के इस दर्द को बहुत जीवंत...बहुत संवेदनशील रचना...औरत के इस दर्द को बहुत जीवंतता से लिखा है....उम्दा रचना..संगीता स्वरुप ( गीत )https://www.blogger.com/profile/18232011429396479154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-71147408457551868202010-05-03T20:55:43.207-07:002010-05-03T20:55:43.207-07:00बेहद उम्दा भाव तथा सच्चे दिल से लिखी गयी रचना... ब...बेहद उम्दा भाव तथा सच्चे दिल से लिखी गयी रचना... बहुत खूब.. पुराना विषय मगर जटिल.. बहुत बढ़िया शब्दों मे उकेरा है दिलीप जी... बधाई स्वीकार करें..हिमांशु पन्तhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06846898954042796560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-51121936823099778282010-05-03T20:30:19.310-07:002010-05-03T20:30:19.310-07:00aaj ka sach he ye
bahtrin
bahut badhai
she...aaj ka sach he ye <br /><br /><br />bahtrin <br /><br /> bahut badhai <br /><br />shekhar kumawatShekhar Kumawathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13064575601344868349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-17572913504277870902010-05-03T18:00:30.570-07:002010-05-03T18:00:30.570-07:00....लाजवाब,प्रभावशाली व प्रसंशनीय रचना ... अदभुत !.......लाजवाब,प्रभावशाली व प्रसंशनीय रचना ... अदभुत !!!कडुवासचhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04229134308922311914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-82588342136828292882010-05-03T11:53:18.991-07:002010-05-03T11:53:18.991-07:00लिखी तो कविता दी आपने पर में मन के भीतर कहानी को ज...लिखी तो कविता दी आपने पर में मन के भीतर कहानी को जन्म दे गई ...<br />पंक्तिया अन्दर तक हिलाने वाली हैsonalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03825288197884855464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-41650989138015002922010-05-03T11:51:26.284-07:002010-05-03T11:51:26.284-07:00yaar dilip
vaise main thoda kanjoos wah wahee pa...yaar dilip <br /><br />vaise main thoda kanjoos wah wahee par .....<br /><br />par na jane kyon aapki rachna padhkar besakhtta nikal pada waah.....<br /><br />sunder nazm........<br /><br />some time visit at Kalaam-e-Chauhan.blogspot.com miloonga waheeKALAAM-E-CHAUHANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878123206322332136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945279121735926663.post-90359087914818942862010-05-03T11:36:11.443-07:002010-05-03T11:36:11.443-07:00bahut achee... aapke vichar aur shaili adbhut hai....bahut achee... aapke vichar aur shaili adbhut hai...Amithttp://www.xcept.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com